that was gunna be my 2nd guess

by any chance are we gunna need to back in time to stop the centaur killing your mum to make sure your born?...if so....i expect 10k gold in my mail box to ensure i help XD

but keep the chapters coming

Sam

Hahaha some thing like that. But i think you will enjoy some of the twists and story plots ive got coming up.

Well i'm loving it so far so i'm sure i'll love the rest of it

Unless you kill me off

Sam

Gridalien wrote:

Unless you kill me off

Oh, please do!

Discipline wrote:
Gridalien wrote:

Unless you kill me off

Oh, please do!


Well if it's doing something brave and heroic i can live with it XD...although i think we all know who the casualty will be....all of us : O.....we'll run into hogger n get pwned XD

Let hogger eat grid for breakfast

Rhagen wrote:
Let hogger eat grid for breakfast


but i thought you loved me : O......you will feel my chickeny wrath XD...and not in the sick way you'd want O.O

Holy Crap, Jago I just read the rest so far...

This is really great stuff! The storyline is so rich and you can feel the tension building up..
Can't wait for more twists..

By the way, are you looking to publish this in the near future once it's done?
my gf studies and lectures english & linguistics, so she could edit it perfectly for you if you need. (i noticed a few gramar & spelling errors - no offense - i do realise that it's only important to get the ideas down initially..)

Keep it up Jago! I can't wait to read more!